Wednesday, December 10, 2008

Hai Jinhe Aatm-Vishwas....

"Hai rath mein kewal chakra ek,
Saarthi bhi pangu nirantar,
Fir naag-paash se bandhe ashwa,
Aadhaarheen path dushkar,
Hai karta soorya tathapi nitya,
Yatra asankhya yojan ki,
Hai jinhe aatm-vishwas, unhe fir chinta kya "saadhan" ki......"

The above lines are taken from a famous poem.
[with due credit to the poet......]

"Hai satya ki raah kathin lekin,
Jeevan anvarat prayas hi hai,
Fir darta kyun mann chalne se,
Jab asha-kiran bhi saath hi hai, 
Tum aage badhte raho sada,
Lipsa yadi vishwa-vijay ki,
Hai jinhe aatm-vishwas, unhe fir chinta kya "saadhan" ki......

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Well Kanchan i must say u have done ur homework perfectlly by getting into the deep insights of this poem..........It’s probably because you have an opinion on everything that concerns success and life......... I think you try to voice ur feelings by using strong headed words....This poem and ur interpretation has worked out quite well but it could have been much much better,going by the level of perfection and standards that u aim for.......not discouraging u but encouraging for getting into more depth of things......

Anonymous said...

Hi..there, visited your blog for the first time & found it so interesting. I must say that you have a talent to write something.
Today's youth are blindly running behind the western culture & language of course.But you have done slightly different job...
Good command on Hindi language.
Keep it up.

Aditya Kumar Tiwari said...

A nicely crafted original and a nicely drafted passage that u've written.. :)

P.S. Who is the original poet?